And It Continues to Mutate!

[marfisk]

1063 tonight and added a new scene to the outline. One of the new scenes actually split in two. There was a lot more going on in there than I'd expected and when this line came up:

If ever Nanik had had a good temperament, the pressure of the master's family had worn it away, leaving only danger behind for those in his care.

...I just knew the scene, and in fact the chapter, had come to an end. Oddly enough, I wanted 1k so much that I kept going and am now lost in a half sentence and it's past my bedtime with important doings tomorrow early so guess I'll figure it out next free moment.

P.S. Nanik is the slave minder in her first slave house.

And stats:
71 scenes
27 complete - 38% of the novel
44 remain
91,650 Estimated length - with an average of 1291 words per scene.
34,853 Current Total

Comments

I'm intrigued

[crimson-angel.livejournal.com]

I'm seriously intrigued by your posts...any way you can snippet a few of those scenes?


CA

Re: I'm intrigued

[marfisk]

Umm, thanks :). Glad it sounds interesting. I really don't tend to reveal more than a paragraph or two of my raw...cause it's raw ;)...because I don't want to get caught into editing before it's time.

So I guess the answer is that I'll think about it...or maybe I'll just keep everyone hanging and snippet once I get into the edit phase.