marfisk | But a Pretty Bauble Edit Is DONE!

Today signals the end of the first edit pass on But a Pretty Bauble. All told, it was pretty easy, though I do have doubts about the overall, and about the ending in specific.

Am I ready to release it to critters? No.

I have a couple steps still to do:

1) I have one note of something I need to seed better in the beginning because it becomes crucial.
2) I have 7 continuity elements to check from the time it takes them to get to the mine and back to whether the dragonkind ever refer to themselves as nomads, to an overuse of the word "then." Those will be fun to squirrel out :p.

Honestly, considering it was a raw rough draft, that's not a heck of a lot. I added less than 5k in new text as I edited, though, and some sections were rewritten from scratch.

The oddest part of this was the outline. Often I'll update things that change, but there were many scenes that when I read the outline blurb, I expected a continuity nightmare. The writing didn't reflect this at all, but the difference between the writing and the blurb gave an interesting peek into just how the story had changed.

Anyway, the point is that it has moved to the next level. It'll be interesting to see the reactions.

And stats:
Edited Today: 2,497 words
29 Chapters complete - 105% of the novel
0 Chapters remain
-3,891 Remaining word count
79,483 Current Total
75,592 Original Total