Entering Stage Two

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The second stage of the story has just begun. She is being introduced to her life as a slave and all its complications. I had originally thought the father had a master plan, but now I realize it grows on him, step by step. This will be even more difficult to convey only through her perspective, but it makes him a much more interesting character, so I'm game :). No new scenes, but unexpected elements have obviously popped up.


And stats:
67 scenes
20 complete - 30% of the novel
47 remain
89,700 Estimated length - with an average of 1338.8 words per scene.
26,776 Current Total